An example of the paper

In class today I showed you a first draft of the paper which we looked at critically to discuss

You can find a recording of the class here: https://cardiff.cloud.panopto.eu/Panopto/Pages/Viewer.aspx?id=2ce53e1e-4109-412a-bab2-b15500a55d8b

You can find the first draft of the paper here. If helpful, the tex file is [here](You can find the first draft of the paper here

We discussed the paper at length and you can find some of our discussion captured in the board I used here.

Some of the main points discussed were:

• Consistency of spelling and/or grammar.
• Some areas where mathematics makes the text less clear and some areas where mathematics helps with clarity.
• Moving some aspects from the introduction to presentation where more depth could be given.
• Consider the color of the graphics to ensure inclusive reading.
• Add some details about the graphics to ensure they’re clear.
• Adding more depth to the description of the graphics.

After this, we put together a story board for the presentation. You can see that on the board here.